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Post by zaku350 on Mar 11, 2006 16:24:11 GMT -5
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Jalathas
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Post by Jalathas on Mar 11, 2006 22:56:06 GMT -5
It was interesting. The movement was a bit choppy, and characters seemed to move around with no regard as to the location of the floor. Also, when the big guy's arm got ripped off, the bloodspray stayed on for a while. The text for the phone call moved too fast, and when he was writing on the wall, nothing appeared until he moved on. All-in-all, it's probably a lot better than what I could do.
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Post by BugHunter on Mar 12, 2006 1:12:55 GMT -5
LOL. Its really funny, you got a bunch of sweet fighting gags in there. I liked it when he threw a fireball arrow. BUT it was moving waaaaayyyy too fast. Gotta slow down the action a bit. I had to watch it three times and freeze it every now and then to figure out what you were doing. You need to add more frames of animation or spread out the frames otherwise it gets choppy and goes way too fast. I mean, the speed could be used as a comedic element, but the movements need to be smoother. But then again, u're talking to an animation major.
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Post by Coral on Mar 12, 2006 9:45:07 GMT -5
That kicked ass.
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Post by zaku350 on Mar 12, 2006 11:04:22 GMT -5
since everybody seemed to like my cartoon does anyone want me 2 post more? Thanks for the comments i will remember them on my next upcoming cartoon. Also i want to make stick figures for everyone  if u want a stick figure tell em and what u want it to look like here r some examples i made the first one is Zaku...the next one is a cat person with 2 uzis and a skate board (wasnt my idea) the third one is just an example    -okay well if u want me 2 make u stick figure just tell me below are examples of stuff your stick figures can use (just an example) if u dont c anything u like for your stick figures just tell me and i will make somtin for u also u need 2 tell me what u want your stick figure 2 look like    i have more stuff just tell em if u want me 2 post it |
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Post by BugHunter on Mar 12, 2006 18:07:58 GMT -5
Zaku looks kool
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Post by zaku350 on Mar 12, 2006 20:47:50 GMT -5
ty very much |
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Post by daft alchemist on Mar 12, 2006 23:51:21 GMT -5
I can't see the images. Is that just me?  |
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Post by BugHunter on Mar 13, 2006 0:19:38 GMT -5
it doesn't show up for me either, i had to open them up in a different window.
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Post by daft alchemist on Mar 13, 2006 9:29:12 GMT -5
I can't do that either though. It just says "[image]".
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Post by Coral on Mar 13, 2006 15:02:37 GMT -5
Ok, to see the link, you press the quote button for the post instead of reply, copy the link from where the ![]() thing is, then paste in your address-er/go-to-er thing, and press enter. |
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Post by Cobra5 on Mar 13, 2006 15:04:02 GMT -5
He used the wrong hosting codes... I'm goign to see if I can alter them for him. Although it might eb dificult, since I'm not the one who hosted the images.
[edit] I fixed his codes. They should work on the board regularly, now.
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Post by daft alchemist on Mar 13, 2006 16:10:00 GMT -5
Hoorah, I can see. ;D
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Post by Tassatul on Mar 14, 2006 22:18:46 GMT -5
Ditto. I havent been able to watch the stick figure thingy cause dialup fts. But the stick figures are cool. Kinda reminds me of Will's cartoons. Speaking of which. . . I want more!
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Post by zaku350 on Mar 16, 2006 19:03:25 GMT -5
im currently working on a longer cartoon (my best cartoon i ever made) and a better one so..... it will be done soon ;D
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. This is the thread i will be posting cartoons.
