Project Maho Discussion Thread

[Cobra5]

Thanks, dan. We needed someone to explain that...

[Dr. Dan]

I did something good?


WoAh...I'm happy now....

[Dr. Dan]

If I were you, I'd erase that and leave that for ingame...cause there are other objectives for this that I can come up with too...a little suspence is a good thing.

[Cobra5]

No, this is her RPG. She wants to tell us this, then she will. I've been being extra careful not to help her. I want to see what she comes up with on her own.

(Although personally I agree with dan) ;D

That's what I said but longer

Um, if I remeber corectly, you said two sentences and contridicted yourself completly

[Dr. Dan]

I think she meant over the phone will...and anyway, if I must say so myself, this is a VERY good storyline in a time of loosing good ones.

[BugHunter]

Oooohhh, now i understand the Maho story . Its so simple!

By the way, i think I'm gonna make a few modifications to my character stat for this rpg cus i really dont like having a serious, serious kind of guy as my character cus I'm not like that. So I'm gonna fix it.

[BugHunter]

((ok, here are the modifications. I think it sounds better and more fitting))

Name: Tanyu Onikage (this is the 5th version and is similar to the GTA version)
Alias: “The Blade”
Sex: Male
Age: 20 22
Eye Color: Dark Brown
Hair Color/Style: Black (spikey)
Height: 5’ 10”
Body Build: Slim but strong Muscular, but not beefy
Profession: Bounty Hunter
Specialty: Getting his Bounties Pay
Other Talents: Close Combat, Blades, Marksmanship, and Weapons; able to down a full mug of beer in gulp ;D

Magic: na
Spells: na

Weapons:
- Kitana
- Explosives
- Customized Twin Pistols
- Concealable Wrist blades
- Ankle Knife
- Incapacitation Devices (like the halo or magnetic cuffs; all for safe capture of bounties that are needed alive)
- Experimental Laser Rifle (stolen from a lab; but he didn’t steal it even though he has it now; requires a short recharge time before each shot but contains power cells that will last 300 years)

Other Equipment:
- Black bullet proof trenchcoat (conceales weapons and is quite fashionable in this line of work)
- Body armor
- Leather gloves (the cool kind that Predator has)
- Sunglasses (for the style)
- steel toed boots

Bio: Tanyu is a fairly young bounty hunter who works for the highest bidder. He’s been know to take jobs as a mercenary, a soldier, and even as a body guard but for the most part he’s just another contract killer. But more popularly, his profession calls upon hunting down criminals (at least, thought to be criminals) and bringing them in, dead or alive (depending on the rules for the reward). And even though he may be a rookie by his group’s standards, he can still face off with the best and is still very professional He's a rookie by by his group's standards, he's been in the profession for only 5 years. Before then, he was in light military training as a child. He also has a tendency to not take things seriously and is a bit carefree at times. However, when appropriate he does get serious. And even then, Tanyu still can’t resist a good drink. Unfortunately, he gets a bit goofy when he gets drunk. He also got the name "The Blade" for being known to use and his ability with a kitana sword which he keeps hidden on the inside back of his trenchcoat.

He’s part of a small secret underground organization with other hunters. Its not exactly secret... like, people in high places know its there, but they dont do anything to get rid of them. In fact, they rather like hiring them because they're so good at their work. However, its mostly rare to see more than one working together on jobs. At the present time, Tanyu's organization are mostly taking jobs from the Project Maho organization since they’re currently offering high bounties on people with “talents”. They dont know that Project Maho are doing bad stuff, they just tell them they're criminals with magic powers. But what do they care, they're just bounties to the hunters. So sometimes you can see Tanyu's people working in accordance with agents. The score count for Tanyu is 5 right now, two of them being "talented", but his co-workers (who’ve been at this much longer, and are better) have taken in several more, normal and "talented". During one capture of a magic user, who stole a bunch of experimental items from a Project Maho lab, he decided to keep an experimental laser rifle the guy stole. Curiously enough, no one seems to miss it.

Pros:
- Skills in combat and weapons
- Very professional
- Mostly Carefree

Cons:
- Not as good as his co-workers
- Loves a good drink (gets drunk)
- Works for the highest bidder (could work for the bad guys)
- Still a rookie (by the others' standards)
- Carefree

((I might make stats for other bounty hunters, but if i do, they're probably going to be the same as the ones from Bugs Itch, just general, simple characters. That is if i decide to do so.))

[hyper4pyropixie]

I finally made up a bio for my charater, and charge a few things. Please let me know what you think.

Name: Sakura Rhodora
Alias: Cherry (Sakura means Cherry Blossom)
Sex: Female
Age: 21
Eye Color: Green
Hair Color/Style: shoulder length blonde hair w/ blue streaks (which are natural)
Height: 5’ 7”
Body Build: thin, medium strength
Profession: College Med. Student
Specialty: coming with cremes and medeince (sp?) that work better than modern cures
Other Talents: N/A
Magic: Earth, wide knowledge of plants, and control plants growth
Spells: N/A
Weapons:
-Pocket knife
Bio: College student who is finishing last college, and getting Med. Degree, also has a part-time job at a doctor's office.

Some believe is a witch, because of her alternate cures and potions. Which usually work twice as fast as presciption medience.

She lives alone, and her disowned from her family a long time ago for her magic ablities and she gets a check in the mail for them every month so they won't have to see again. Also her parents are afraid of the press would found out her, and ruin there choices her father will get into office.

Project Maho found out about her, because she was treating a injury on one of the agents. And he felt her power.

Pros:
-Smart
-Quick thinker when some one is hurt
Cons:
- Is too emotionly involved w/ paients.
- Appears a bit ditzy when not talking about medience , so no one takes her seriously

[Cobra5]

But my character stays the same ;D Terrible, evil, ruthless, murderer, who is seemingly invincable and massecres so many people...


...But turns out to be a pretty nice guy.

[BugHunter]

I dont think blonde hair with blue streaks is natural . And why would you want to be blonde? Aren't you brunette?

And why do you have a Japanese name if you're blonde?

And its spelled "creams" and "medicine"

I think wide knowledge of plants and control plants growth belongs in Other Talents. And i'd think your spell would be to heal, right?

And if you've disowned your family, why would they be sending you checks in the mail? That doesn't sound realistic.

Well there ya go. Thats my critique

[Dr. Dan]

might wanna change that bug...Pix has dark hair...eh I dunno, she might get angry.

[copyKatt]

blonde hair with blue streaks...

[Cobra5]

Wait, we're alowed to critique other players characters!? I thought that was against the 'rules'!

Dangit, I've been missing out this whole time...

Anyhow, I must agree with bughunter. But, this is not my RPG, so it's up to palla, not me (and we ALL know what she is going to say). I would allow it even if it was my RPG though... although it might have its flaws, it does seem in the 'accetable' range.

[hyper4pyropixie]

Oh right, thanks for everyone's opinion! I did not know about 'critiqueing' rule. But i asked for it!
The blue streaks thing i thought would be natural because her power might affected her appearence.
The japense name came from the fact one of her power has to do with plants, and i knew Sakura might Cherry Blossom! Her last name also has to do with plant, Rhodora is a family of fern like plants.

I guess i some thinking to do about my character, and might ask for your opinion again, if it is ok with palla!

[Tassatul]

I think Palla did mention something about magic having an effect on hair/eyes/various other features. I have blue-within-blue eyes of a Fremen(or any other spice addicted person)