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Post by BugHunter on Jul 29, 2003 2:16:54 GMT -5
(wispering to Tass) pssst...just say her work is good and she'll leave us alone  |
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Post by palla on Jul 30, 2003 17:27:07 GMT -5
That is insulting. I want an honest opinion, whether it be good or bad.
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Post by BugHunter on Jul 30, 2003 22:32:56 GMT -5
I was just kidding sheesh. And i already gave my opinion way back in the first page. Why dont you post something new. Whenever something is 2 pages back it seems to be lost to oblivion.
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Post by Cobra5 on Jul 31, 2003 13:48:38 GMT -5
Yeah, that's pretty true. Two paghes seems to be the cutoff.
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Post by BugHunter on Aug 1, 2003 9:41:08 GMT -5
which sucks because people just seem to keep forgetting what was said in the past around here...  |
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Post by Tassatul on Aug 1, 2003 12:00:17 GMT -5
Okay, Ill do it.  Remember, this is just my opinoin, dont flip out if you disagree. The first one. Well, the beginning is good. Descriptive, kinda intrigueing. The only thing is, it just kinda ends. Like you got bored of it and stopped writing. Haunted Heart. I actually like this one. It really conveys the feelings and such. It makes sense, cause that kinda stuff really happens. Cool. Hunter of the Night. This is gotta be the best. The rhyming is great. And since its not about crying and lost loves, its infinatly better in my mind.But thats just personal opinion. |
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Post by BugHunter on Aug 1, 2003 21:06:58 GMT -5
Yea, i liked her last one better as well
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Post by palla on Aug 3, 2003 18:19:27 GMT -5
Hey, really? Thanks , that means a lot.
Tass, I'll take a look at that poem and try to revise it.
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Post by Cobra5 on Aug 3, 2003 21:43:53 GMT -5
If you didn't catch that hint, heather, they both said (and I agree) it's better when you don't write about death, and people crying, and lost love, and whatnot, like a goth or something.
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Post by palla on Aug 4, 2003 12:44:40 GMT -5
Well, I... ...never mind. But, Tass I think it was said it was okay, if not pretty good or something like that. 
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Post by Cobra5 on Aug 4, 2003 17:49:58 GMT -5
No, the way I see it, it's not that its bad when you write about depressing things, it's better when you don't
I was just agreeing with tassatul when he said:
and I'm sorry if it seems lie I'm putting words in you guys' mouth.
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Post by palla on Aug 4, 2003 18:30:16 GMT -5
No, the way I see it, it's not that its bad when you write about depressing things, it's better when you don't I was just agreeing with tassatul when he said: and I'm sorry if it seems lie I'm putting words in you guys' mouth. I understand. Listen, would anyone be interested in reading the full "Love and Blood" story? It's quite long, but would anyone care to read it? |
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Post by Tassatul on Aug 4, 2003 18:41:28 GMT -5
yah, youve understood me Will. Poems about death/love/whatever have their place, but im just not abig fan of them.
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Post by palla on Aug 4, 2003 19:17:40 GMT -5
So, Tass, what about "Love and Blood"?
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Post by Cobra5 on Aug 4, 2003 19:28:14 GMT -5
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Remember, this is just my opinoin, dont flip out if you disagree. 
