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Post by palla on Aug 4, 2003 19:31:47 GMT -5
Why are you laughing?  |
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Post by Cobra5 on Aug 4, 2003 20:11:54 GMT -5
We were just talking about how Love/crying/depressing based poems are not our cup of tea, and then you're like, "So whos up for readin' Love & Blood?". I mean, just looking at that title. It was like, everything we said we did NOT want to rea, lol. It makes me wonder if you get whats going on sometimes  Of course, as I said in PM, I'll read it. |
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Post by palla on Aug 4, 2003 21:23:33 GMT -5
Ah. You know, I didn't realize that until you pointed it out.  Never mind...yet again... |
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Post by BugHunter on Aug 6, 2003 0:43:10 GMT -5
doo dee doo dee doo...
pssst, Heather, stop skipping posts...
*twidles thumbs* ;D
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Post by Cobra5 on Aug 6, 2003 16:24:58 GMT -5
You had this problem a long time ago, then you stopped, and now you're having reocurences |
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Post by palla on Aug 6, 2003 17:23:48 GMT -5
It isn't that I skipped, it's just that Tass had read some of it before and I don;t remember him minding it.
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Post by hyper4pyropixie on Aug 8, 2003 21:23:44 GMT -5
Changing with the Wind
By Hyper4pyropixie
The whipping winds struck the tender ground,
The fabric leaves lifted without a sound,
The winds hummed a hoarse song,
Forcing the beaten tree branches to sing-a-long,
The path of footsteps disappeared without a trace,
The hill once again has a brand new face.
On all the hills, the endless wind blows,
Change is what forever flows.
Never will the hills ever have the same face,
Never will the wind blow at the same pace.
Many changes come and go,
Change is what I always know.
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Post by BugHunter on Aug 8, 2003 23:42:40 GMT -5
Oooh, Thats a nice one  . *thumbs up*. Poems that rhym always seem to score high. But there are a few places i can tell a rhym was forced or something. But good job |
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Post by Cobra5 on Aug 9, 2003 0:38:30 GMT -5
I actually like the subject matter this time... That's gotta be a first. I can give it a 'not bad'. Which is saying a lot, since the highest rating even Poe got was "Crap". I don't know if you already know, but I'm extrremly harsh on poetry. |
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Post by BugHunter on Aug 9, 2003 1:00:31 GMT -5
looks like someone doesn't a appreciate literary art  |
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Post by Cobra5 on Aug 9, 2003 1:05:23 GMT -5
No, I'm just really, really pickey. And very blunt.
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Post by palla on Aug 9, 2003 11:38:09 GMT -5
Yes, this we know. Poe was an amazing poet and writer, who created master pieces out of dark subject matter. |
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Post by Dr. Dan on Aug 9, 2003 12:14:21 GMT -5
My favorite literary peice, or one of them, is his Raven one...not that I can remember the exact name of it, lol, but Quote the Raven "Nevermove" one....I really really like that one..
Oh and Pix, Very nice.
I write as well, but none of you will ever see it ever....ever...unless you talk to one of my x's or something and get a poem I wrote for them...and if you do I'll strangle you...seriously...haha.
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Post by BugHunter on Aug 9, 2003 16:39:46 GMT -5
Well thats not very nice...
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Post by hyper4pyropixie on Aug 9, 2003 18:03:08 GMT -5
You are going strangle me.... LOL , actually i been talking to one of your x's lately. She a really good friend of mine. I sure she love to hand over 1 of those lovely poems of yours. then i am sure everyone on the board would love to see them. |
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Never mind...yet again... 
. *thumbs up*. Poems that rhym always seem to score high. But there are a few places i can tell a rhym was forced or something. But good job 
