Adventurer's Guild

[Coral]

And this is me, revised
Name: Coral Zentoren
Alias: Coral
Race: Human, Westerner
Age: 29
Eyes: Black
Hair: Black
Height: Small
Gender: Male
Profession: Soldier
Specialty: Warfare
Special Move: "Disable": More or less, a channeled bolt of extra accurate lightning shot from his rifle at someones leg or arm.

Weapons of Choice:
-Eastern crossbow with his own modifications: Namely, the abillity to fire flaming arrows with oil, and his own arrows that are just hollowed out bolts with oil in them, which explode on contact.

-A Magitechnology Rifle he stole from an agent working in Katyr

Armor and Equipment:
- Special western alloys carved eastern style and enchanted.

Magic:
None, for he is a magicless bastard


Bio:

He grew up in the city state of Alfaria, and was the weakest boy in his class. Bullies picked on him everyday, and one day, the bully decided to run towards him, from about 100 feet away, and Coral didn't appreciate this. The start of his career was when he knocked the bully out with a pebble. He was chosen to go and hunt criminals down in the east, and kill off enemy agents finding uses for magitechnology, or steal it. He ended up running away with the cash.

Pros:
An excellent, accurate sharpshooter than can reload and aim fast. The perfect assassin.


Cons:
Can't really fight in close combat... At all. The best he can do is take a swing at you and get his own hand hurt.

[Saknicep]

Ohh, I like that, a genius, where as mine is more of a close range guy...oohh..excellent...........pay no attention to me.

[Cobra5]

Your character (and Sho as well) are what I originally had in mind for western 'fighters'. Even dedicated physical fighters know and use magical attacks, even if they are not as proficient with them as an eastern mage. Just as western fighters- they use technology, even if they are not as skilled with them as a western Gadgeteer.

Well, I personally aprove yours.

As for Coral, also, this one is great also. A dedicated archer- I'm surprised we don't have one yet. Gunpowder has been invented, so if you would rather use that inside the bolts as an explosive you can.

The bolts could easily be bought at any store, and the modifications would take only simple tools. Incideneries wouldn't be too dificult to find, or even, fashion some of your own. There are alchemist shops, after all, you could easily get the ingredients from.

Since your character is involved with Magitechnology, I should explain it a bit. Katyr is the name of both the continent and the empire from which Magitechnology comes from. It is the nothern most continent in the East (the Eastern continent is actually four smaller continents very close to eachother). Katyr stays to themselves, trading with no-one and having poor diplomatic ties with all other kingdoms, which has peeked a bit of suspicion, but no out-right hostile actions have ever taken place. Most believe it is simply becuase they are niether Easterners or Westerners, and simply have nowhere to fit in.

So I approve yours as well.

[Tassatul]

Awesome, more people equals more posts! Both Coral and Saknicep, nice job. Hopefully, we can wrap up the current battle soon and work you into the storyline.

[Coral]

One question: Are all the characters in their 20's? LoL. From what i've seen, it looks as if my character is gonna be the oldest...

[Cobra5]

Kal is an old old, decrepit, withering man.

[Deimos]

old old, decrepit, withering, albeit unbelievably ungodly powerful in the mystical arts...

[copyKatt]

well, i like the two new characters entering. one thing i noticed with sakniceps character, though, is the physical descrption of the clothing (namely the black turtle neck and the red lined trenchcoat) doesnt really sound too medival, but nothing of real importance. you can say its just something they had in the west or something. the only reason i brought that up is becuase 'the matrix' was the first thing that sprung into my mind . but thats just me. not really anything you have to change.

and then to Coral, i like the revisions you did to your character. i think he'll fit in alot better. the onlt question i have is just how big are these explosions going to be? im sure its not going to be a problem or anything, just wondering.

but other then those minor things, cassie being a nitpicker and all, i like the characters.

[glow=red,2,300]APPROVED[/glow] A--- (my stamp of approval ;D)

[Deimos]

you should see his drawn rendition of his character- it'll be a bit more believable...reminiscent of Sho...but considering their shared backgrounds, it's expected

(he draws on an exceptional level! another artist on the board)

[copyKatt]

another artist, eh? and you already have your character drawn up and designed? wow, someone does there homework. not a procrastinator like some of the other artists i know *nonchalantly glances at Al*

nyuk nyuk, im only yanking your chain, buddy

but thats great, saknicep. like i said, i just got a weird matrix-esque picture in my head with the whole turneck and trenchcoat bit. but if theres anyway that one would be able to see this supposid drawn rendition of your character *hint hint * then that would dispel any skewed visualization of him ;D we love to see peoples art here at the cobras lair

[Coral]

Explosions, usually the size is half of a handgrenade explosion. Oh, can I have some NPC Privates under me? My guy is part of the Alfarian Millitary as a 2nd Lieutenant (Killed Lieutenant to get command). And the exploding arrows, it takes me a while to make them, but I can make them with Oil or distilled alcohol. Just anything that burns like oil.

[Saknicep]

Wow! you like it, thanks! To answer the question about the matrix type quality about the trench coat that was actually the last thing to come in my mind. You see, my drawn characters tench coat looks more like a suit with a trutle neck under the actual coat...umm... other that that, I'm otherwise happy that you liked it.

[copyKatt]

wel, were all good here then. we just ahve to finish up our battle with lordsmith, then there will probably be an aftermath type thing, and then we'll be on our way again. you guys are going to have to think of ways for your characters to meet up with us and a reason for then to start traveling with us. that will probably require the party know where they're headed though... well have to talk that one out with the people already playing though. where's the party headed next?

[Coral]

Hmm. Perhaps ill meet you while i'm in the middle of a war, and then you wont know where you'll have to go, and only I can lead you! LoL. But you can take the alternative to that and torture me for the answer.

[Cobra5]

You can have some privates I guess. So you're guy is evil, huh? Killing his supiorior to get his rank...

And trenchcoats? Nothing really wrong with that. They had leather- and if they can make banded leather armor with segmented greaves and guantlets, I really don't think a simple trench coat or duster would be that hard to make.