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Post by Deimos on Dec 7, 2004 14:57:15 GMT -5
well...it's all part of the experience...
and with that- I can truly say to you- welcome to the board
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Post by Cobra5 on Dec 7, 2004 16:11:03 GMT -5
Yeah, its how stuff works around here.
I was going to spend my spare time writing for Resident Evil RPG, but I think instead that I'll continue the Soul Saber story...
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Post by BugHunter on Dec 7, 2004 20:09:17 GMT -5
I feel kinda conflicted....
I put my heart and soul on the forum, I didn't get a necessarily negative reception and I'm grateful for that, but I dont want people to just brush it aside... and yet again, I wonder if I want people to read it... I posted some stuff I've never even told you guys, my friends, before... and I dont hide much. At least not now. Can't now anyways, can I...
Well, technically, my story, which is my story, literal personal story, and no kidding..., is a story... So.... it does deserve a reaction in this thread
I still gotta read Will's Soul Saber story though... And I'll try to pencil in reworking on the Tanid, which is Tanyu's story. Maybe winter break...
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Post by Cobra5 on Dec 7, 2004 20:51:51 GMT -5
Heh, I reacted to your long post. I read it all. Like I said, I know how you felt through that whole thing  |
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Post by BugHunter on Dec 7, 2004 21:08:34 GMT -5
Yea, thanks for that. And Al too.
Hey, I have the pictures to the original Tanid right here! But still no way to post it...
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Post by Dr. Dan on Dec 7, 2004 22:48:15 GMT -5
I'm going to eat your soul.  |
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Post by bethel on Dec 8, 2004 10:14:22 GMT -5
I feel kinda conflicted.... I put my heart and soul on the forum, I didn't get a necessarily negative reception and I'm grateful for that, but I dont want people to just brush it aside... and yet again, I wonder if I want people to read it... I posted some stuff I've never even told you guys, my friends, before... and I dont hide much. At least not now. Can't now anyways, can I...  You want me to critique your rant as I would a story? Because I can.... but I thought it was a ranty thing so I didnt give any thought to giving you imput on your writing style or the fluidity of contetent. I will if you want though.  ;D Its just that I dont hold any standards for rants to critique bassed off... they are just written words of how you feel at the moment they can be disjointed or whatever... but if you want me to view it as a story then thats different. I can treat it as such. |
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Post by Cobra5 on Dec 8, 2004 12:14:10 GMT -5
You don't have to critique it... he was just asking for a reply of some type. Imagine writing an entire biography and no-one even taking the time to read it. It can hurt...
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Post by bethel on Dec 8, 2004 12:30:45 GMT -5
You don't have to critique it... he was just asking for a reply of some type. Imagine writing an entire biography and no-one even taking the time to read it. It can hurt... Well this is true, but I dont know what he wants as a reply..... I mean I read everything posted on this thread, including his bio/rant... but he said before he wrote it that it was just him yelling... I mean its like music.. I may play my violin and might be performing. I expect someone to say something about it, clap boo or something.. But I may just be playing through something I am feeling at the moment... I don't necisarily want anyone to clap for that... I was playing for me. Its tottaly irrelivent what anyone else thinks of it..... some art really is "for the artist, that art is not for you." to quote Alix Olsen. Now if he wanted me to critique it I would do that here but if he just wanted my opinion about how he felt, or someone to say "I do" or "I dont feel your pain" or something like that... I would probably PM him, since it was a writing thread and like I said before I felt like I was only taking away from stories you and Alys wrote wanting (I would assume) opinions from a fellow reading/writers standpoint and no one aknowleged. |
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Post by BugHunter on Dec 8, 2004 13:04:45 GMT -5
Yea, let me rephrase that. I didn't mean critique exactly. But it was my story. A simple reaction would be fine... clap, boo - great, but dont just say lets move on to the next thing or go back to this, especially when you pushed me to bear my freakin soul... Not that I'm complaining...I mean I did accept your apology. And yes, I definitely have to read Will's story
And I think the writing style is called "freestyle" or something. Its exactly the way I would write if I were writing in my journal and definitely not on an essay (maybe a little on non-formal ones). But when you read it, its exactly what is going through my head at that very moment, a lot of it is the honest me without a front. I write as my brain goes. So I have nothing to hide now. And this is honesty, not art. Whatever I post on the forum is definitely for everyone, cus, I mean, its the freakin forum... Its open to the freakin internet...
And that pre-yelling statement thing, that was just in case I did yell, which I did, (I wrote that before I even started) but if you think it was all just yelling and ranting nonsense or rage... well then you've completely missed the point and... I'd love to say I'd bash your head in, but thats the old me and I wont, hehehe. And I know you civilized ladies and gents wouldn't...right? ...
Oh thanks a lot buddy.... If i want sensitivity, I'm going to go straight to you... Though I shouldn't complain, I know you could definitely say a lot worse. (--_--)
And NO, I do not want pity, because if you recall, that story had a happy ending, and still is!
And sure, PM's would be fine. What the hey. Bring it on. What do I got to lose.
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Post by bethel on Dec 8, 2004 13:13:26 GMT -5
And sure, PM's would be fine. What the hey. Bring it on. What do I got to lose. Uh your soul it would apear.. ::Smirks:: |
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Post by BugHunter on Dec 8, 2004 13:45:57 GMT -5
oh haha, very funny
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Post by Tassatul on Dec 10, 2004 17:55:21 GMT -5
More stories Will!
I'd write about the young necromancer known as Tass, but I'm afraid it wouldnt be too interesting. . . Theres always the infested Kaiou-Tur Tassatul. Or better yet, I think I'll post in the RPG thread. . .
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Post by palla on Dec 27, 2004 1:24:53 GMT -5
*Untitled*
(It poured from my fingers. No rhyme, no reason, just...here.)
Born
beneath a gleaming star
From
a Daughter of One
Special
in so many ways
Belief
in Him runs wide and deep
Rumors
come, go, and vanish
People
hear the call of angels
They
flee to the sacred city to See
Cold
are they all, yet warmed by Him
Difficult
for the disbelievers
Savior
to all others
Miracle
despite what they say
Truth
cannot be for sure
Hope
is there
Born
beneath a star
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Post by BugHunter on Dec 27, 2004 19:59:15 GMT -5
Yo Will, I finally read your Soul Saber: Katt and Will intro, which is like, waaayyy back in page 3... Makes me want to go back to writing Tanyu's story, hehe, but I think it'll be a low chance for now with so many things distracting me at the moment.  Remember how they run into Tanyu? Tanyu was sitting at the bar trying to fix himself a cureall for his hangover when u two run out of the place for some reason and in doing so accidentally bump into him, making him drop his egg, and thats why he decides to follow you, lol. And even though he has a killer hangover (cus the guy drank a lot in those days) he's still skillful enough to travel quickly by jumping from tree to tree while staying hidden behind u guys. I can't believe I remember that, that was waaayyy back in the beginning, lol. Hey Heather, is that a poem about Christ's birth? Not bad . Actually... I'm kinda amazed... wow. Nice. |
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You want me to critique your rant as I would a story? Because I can.... but I thought it was a ranty thing so I didnt give any thought to giving you imput on your writing style or the fluidity of contetent. I will if you want though. 
;D
